Elemental Saga: The Awakening Negative Reviews

Elemental Saga: The Awakening App Complaints & User Negative Comments 2024

Elemental Saga: The Awakening app received 18 complaints, negative comments and reviews by users. Have you ever had a bad experience using Elemental Saga: The Awakening? Can you share your negative thoughts about elemental saga: the awakening?

Elemental Saga: The Awakening for Negative User Reviews

✓ Story has potential, but needs an editor to go over it.The story has a lot of potential, but needs an editor to go over it. It is chalk full of basic grammatical errors and spelling mistakes that *really* detract from the quality of the work, things that even a standard spellchecker would pick up and flag. I really want to like this, but it shouldn't have been published in it's current form...it feels rushed and unfinished. Once things have been edited I'll be happy to change my rating..LoclifVersion: 1.0.0

✓ ProofreadDouble negatives, Bad grammar, comes off kinda forced because of the bad flow. It's a good story but story really needs an editor or something, would make it a lot smoother and easier to read..Emo teen girls everywhereVersion: 1.0.3

✓ Not worth itIt's painfully obvious that English is a second language for the writer, which makes it nearly impossible to get immersed in the story. The story also reveals poor writing skills which is compounded by the lack of an interesting setting. It's a cool idea but poorly executed..T-Mart71Version: 1.0.0

✓ It’s brokenAm I the only one who has a problem with the gender selection? I picked female but everyone keeps calling me he. I’m so confused..Ehx deeVersion: 1.0.3

✓ At lastI've found a poor Choice of Games interactive fiction app. The quality of the writing is appalling and unbelievably it *gets worse* after the early pages. Unfortunately I am so used to excellent CoG apps that I didn't even try it before buying the IAP..KoxvolioVersion: 1.0.3

✓ WhatHonestly a total waste of money. I can’t understand what the “author” is trying to say. I’m only five minutes into this, and trying to makes sense of it is hurting my brain. Do not buy it at all. You may be thinking it can’t be that bad. It is..ZhysonVersion: 1.0.3

✓ At least run it through a grammar checkerStory could be good, but English is obviously not the author's first language. It seems as though the story was written in a different language and then translated to English. Poor spelling, grammar, etc..TodddsterVersion: 1.0.3

✓ Editor dearly neededI honestly think it's a great concept and the story definitely has the potential. Yet with all the spelling and grammatical errors it really kills the flow of the work. If an editor just refines it and an update is released it'll be sure to be great.Pkent42Version: 1.0.0

✓ 💩The story kinda just did it's own thing regardless of what the player chose to do. And the lack of player choice makes it less of if a text based game. Grammar is definitely a huge problem in the game. It looked like they never ran a spell check in it cause I saw "thier" instead of their at least twice..Mark Riddle17Version: 1.0.3

✓ It's called EditingLoaded with typos and poor grammar. Story had lots and lots of potential but its start was very slow. Then came the MAJOR leaps in logic and story gaps. Example: I'm playing band I get to my new room and there are 4 people there. They start talking like they know me. Only I as the reader never read about meeting them. They just pop up and I'm scratching my head wondering if I missed a page??? Think Magicians tv show only worse. Thank goodness no one had to pay for this. IF BIG if you are willing to play along and create your own understanding of the story it could be a two star rating..UnidraconusVersion: 1.0.3

✓ Revisions are easy!If I were to write “thsi gmea is grtae” I would be ashamed. They writers really should have looked over their (notice it is I after E) work even once, they would have caught hundreds of simple mistakes..RugRatRewVersion: 1.0.4

✓ Terrible translation ruins the gameI only managed to get a few pages into the game. I couldn't go any further because frankly the writing was so poor, I could barely understand what the author was trying to say. I can only assume it was translated from another language, but in that case the author should have run the script past editors before releasing it. As it is, the whole game has been ruined by poor writing, poor translation skills and lack of editing..Genny-JaneVersion: 1.0.3

✓ Interesting storyAt least the setting was interesting, but it’s very unfortunate that the poor grammar and usage of punctuation makes the story difficult to read............ ............ ......Version: 1.0.3

✓ 😕Overloaded with grammar, punctuation, and other errors. There are too many of these for me to enjoy the story. Please fix!.Jewels2244Version: 1.0.3

✓ Awful grammar and spellingIt was hard to enjoy reading..And i meant every wordVersion: 1.0.4

✓ Poor grammarWould love to get into a story like this, unfortunately the spelling and grammar make it almost impossible as there are countless mistakes. :(.MaddagascaVersion: 1.0.4

✓ Great concept, terrible executionThe grammar and writing in this game is awful. The text sounds like a robot who can’t speak English. I love the idea of a playable book and think this is a cool concept but they seriously should have worked with a professional editor before putting this game out. It’s not okay at all to charge for something that reads like someone who can’t speak English at all wrote it..MjWood25Version: 1.0.3

✓ Not worth the time.I could look past all the spelling errors. But the limited choices and the garbled text was too much. Nothing I selected really seemed to matter and one of my stats glitched and went up to 110%. Relationships with characters seemed pointless and the story is confusing. Don’t bother..DarthRawrVersion: 1.0.3

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